Up until this comic and the previous one, I’d never employed an inner dialogue for any of my characters. I’ve found it to be a great tool for getting into their heads, and the writing for the rest of this story will be better for it.
I’m also dividing up the story into separate chapters (or “issues” that I will print as individual comic books). This is the start of chapter 6, and all of the inner dialogue will be from Jake’s point of view. I want to keep it simple so as not to confuse the reader, so we’ll see how it goes. Let me know if you like it or not!